[Mavs] comments on the requirements document
dimitri papadimitriou <dpapadimitriou@psg.com> Sun, 09 October 2005 20:40 UTC
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jim, all, you will in the attached document comments, suggestions and input to the requirement document in general, i think that the terms being introduced should be further refiend, and the text would be more concrete if a "high level" reference model would be introduced also in order to ease reading it may be advisable to be more synthetic in terms of requirements by adding for instance at the end of each section a short paragraph recollecting the requirements, the text as part of each section should at the end just detail the rational and/or motivation for introducing this requirement in the context of the proposed reference model; the latter should help the reader to put these requirements in perspective thanks, - dimitri.
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