[MBONED] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-mboned-cbacc-02
Reshad Rahman via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 11 April 2021 21:15 UTC
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Subject: [MBONED] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-mboned-cbacc-02
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Reviewer: Reshad Rahman Review result: Almost Ready YANG Doctor review of rev-02 by Reshad Rahman. Comments/questions: The document and YANG module-name have CBACC, yet the module prefix is "ambi", is this on purpose? Intuitively, I was expecting the prefix to be "cbacc". For presence statement, use CBACC-enabled instead of cbacc-enabled? Is max-mss for a TCP Max Segment Size, or is this really max packet size? And no need for jumbograms since this is for UDP? Consider renaming max-bits-per-second to something along the lines of max-speed. Description says kilobits (not bits). Add "unit" statement e.g. to data-rate-window and max-bits-per-second OOC, why so many priorities? I'm used to seeing 3 or 8 bits for priority. Security considerations should mention the YANG data nodes. Regards, Reshad.
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