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"Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com> Mon, 12 August 2019 22:27 UTC

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From: "Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com>
To: Charlie Perkins <charles.perkins@earthlink.net>, mboned <mboned@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [MBONED] draft-ietf-mboned-ieee802-mcast-problems-07 submitted, new WGLC to be initiated
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Subject: Re: [MBONED] draft-ietf-mboned-ieee802-mcast-problems-07 submitted, new WGLC to be initiated
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Hi Charlie,

While working on the shepherd write-up for ieee802-mcast-problems I saw that
there were some unaddressed nits auto-detected by the nits tool:

https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-mboned-ieee802-mcast-problems-07.txt

  ** The document seems to lack a both a reference to RFC 2119 and the
     recommended RFC 2119 boilerplate, even if it appears to use RFC 2119
     keywords. 

     RFC 2119 keyword, line 639: '...   It is RECOMMENDED that multicast-en...'

  == Missing Reference: 'ICMPv6' is mentioned on line 558, but not defined


I'm not sure whether it's better to remove the single RECOMMENDED usage and
make it a weaker non-normative suggestion or to add the boilerplate, but it
probably should be fixed, and I suppose the ICMPv6 deserves a reference also.

Thanks and regards,
Jake

On 2019-07-26, 11:29, "Charlie Perkins" <charles.perkins@earthlink.net> wrote:

    Hello folks,
    
    Since the conclusion of the previous WGLC for 
    draft-ietf-mboned-ieee802-mcast-problems, the following changes have 
    been made.
    
        o  Improved wording in section describing ARPsponge.
        o  Included new text in Security Considerations to alert about
           problems regarding Group Key management caused by multicast
           unreliability and implementation bugs.
        o  Corrected occurrences of "which" versus "that" and "amount" versus
           "number".
        o  Updated bibliographic citations, repaired broken URLs as needed.
        o  Many more editorial improvements and grammatical corrections.
    
    Some of these changes, while not controversial, deserve at least the 
    opportunity for WG review.  Please take a look at the new draft 
    draft-ietf-mboned-ieee802-mcast-problems-07.
    
    Regards,
    Charlie P.
    
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