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Re: [MBONED] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-mboned-dorms-01

"Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com> Sat, 23 October 2021 19:38 UTC

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From: "Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com>
To: Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>, "yang-doctors@ietf.org" <yang-doctors@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [MBONED] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-mboned-dorms-01
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Hi Reshad,

I finally just updated the security considerations section according to
RFC 8407's advice and template, which I think was the last outstanding
change you recommended.

If the latest doc has addressed all your comments (together with the
prior edits to -02), I'm planning to ask for last call to begin, so
please let me know if you notice anything I missed, and thanks again
for the review.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mboned-dorms-03
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mboned-dorms-03.txt

Thanks and regards,
Jake

PS: Since it's been so long, here's the thread if you wanted to see the
history:
https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mboned/F7x1TM8ZqdjFq8jlSSi9-N-NMCo/

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