Re: [MBONED] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-mboned-mtrace-v2-22: (with COMMENT)

[Hitoshi Asaeda <[e-mail]>]

Hi Ben,

Thanks for your review and comments.

> 2018/01/24 11:17, Ben Campbell <[e-mail]> wrote:
> 
> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-mboned-mtrace-v2-22: No Objection
> 
> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all
> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this
> introductory paragraph, however.)
> 
> 
> Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html
> for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions.
> 
> 
> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mboned-mtrace-v2/
> 
> 
> 
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> COMMENT:
> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
> 
> -3.1. Length: "Length SHOULD NOT exceed the available MTU"
> How does that interact with the previous "MUST NOT be fragmented" requirement?

If the length exceeds the available MTU, the packet is considered invalid and is discarded. This sounds “SHOULD NOT”, and it is done in accordance with the requirement that the packet MUST NOT be fragmented.

> -2: There are lower case versions of the 2119 keywords. Unless those were meant
> to be capitalized, please consider using the boilerplate from 8174.

Yes, we’ll do for the next revision. Thanks.

Best regards,
--
Hitoshi Asaeda