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"Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com> Sun, 22 December 2019 00:59 UTC

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From: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com>
To: "Manfredi (US), Albert E" <albert.e.manfredi@boeing.com>
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> 2019/12/21 午後7:08、Manfredi (US), Albert E <albert.e.manfredi@boeing.com>のメール:
> 
> -----Original Message-----
> From: MBONED <mboned-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Carlos Pignataro via Datatracker
> 
>> Nits:
>> 
>> Abstract
>> 
>>  This document recommends deprecation of the use of Any-Source
>>  Multicast (ASM) for interdomain multicast.  It recommends the use of
>>  Source-Specific Multicast (SSM) for interdomain multicast
>>  applications and that hosts and routers in these deployments fully
>>  support SSM.
>> 
>> CMP: Typo? "and that" does not seem sensible.
> 
> I think it's grammatically correct. However, perhaps a less tricky way of saying the same thing would be:
> 
> "It recommends the use of Source-Specific Multicast (SSM), for interdomain multicast applications, and *it recommends that* hosts and routers, in these deployments, fully support SSM."
> 
> In short, "it recommends" applies both to the first point, use of SSM in interdomain, and it applies to the second point too, that hosts and routers fully support SSM.
> 

Thanks for the quick response. 

I am not sure about its correctness (I was expecting at least a comma before the “and”), but your suggestion above is easier to read, potentially less ambiguous as well. I suggest an update and that the text above is used :-)

— Carlos.

> Bert
>

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