[mif] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-mif-mpvd-arch-10: (with COMMENT)

"Spencer Dawkins" <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 19 February 2015 04:39 UTC

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Subject: [mif] Spencer Dawkins' No Objection on draft-ietf-mif-mpvd-arch-10: (with COMMENT)
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Spencer Dawkins has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mif-mpvd-arch-10: No Objection

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In this text:

5.2.3.1.2.  Connectionless APIs

   For connectionless APIs, the host should provide an API that PvD-
   aware applications can use to query the PvD associated with the
   packet.  For outgoing traffic on this transport API object, the OS
   should use the selected outgoing PvDs, determined as described above.
   
does "above" mean "in section 5.2.2"? Whatever it means, perhaps a cross
reference would be helpful.