Re: [mile] [EXT] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft

"Haynes Jr., Dan" <dhaynes@mitre.org> Mon, 21 October 2019 21:34 UTC

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From: "Haynes Jr., Dan" <dhaynes@mitre.org>
To: "Nancy Cam-Winget (ncamwing)" <ncamwing@cisco.com>, "mile@ietf.org" <mile@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [mile] [EXT] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft
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Hi Nancy and Stephen,

I have some minor nits and questions.


  *   Abstract
     *   Is “Vulnerability” a defined term?
  *   Section 2
     *   Should this also reference RFC 8174?
  *   Section 3
     *   Change “Note again…any information that in is the abstract realm…” to “Note again…any information that is in the abstract realm…”.
  *   Section 4
     *   Change “JSON based” to “JSON-based”.

Beyond that, I am comfortable with moving this draft forward.

Thanks,

Danny

From: mile <mile-bounces@ietf.org>; on behalf of "Nancy Cam-Winget (ncamwing)" <ncamwing@cisco.com>;
Date: Monday, September 23, 2019 at 4:29 PM
To: "mile@ietf.org"; <mile@ietf.org>;
Subject: [EXT] [mile] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft

Fellow MILE participants,

This is a Working Group Last Call for https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-rolie-vuln/

Please provide your review and feedback to the draft’s readiness by Oct 21st so that we can move it forward.

Warm regards,
                Nancy