Re: [mile] review request on the json IODEF draft at https://github.com/milewg/draft-ietf-mile-jsoniodef
"Takeshi Takahashi" <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp> Tue, 25 December 2018 09:54 UTC
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Subject: Re: [mile] review request on the json IODEF draft at https://github.com/milewg/draft-ietf-mile-jsoniodef
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Hi Takahiro, Thank you very much for your kind reviews. The latest version of the draft on the github reflected your kind comments. The table in Section 3.1 and the CDDL data model/json schema were corrected. https://github.com/milewg/draft-ietf-mile-jsoniodef Thank you, and kind regards, Take -----Original Message----- From: mile <mile-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Takahiko Nagata Sent: Thursday, December 20, 2018 4:50 PM To: MILE IETF <mile@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [mile] review request on the json IODEF draft at https://github.com/milewg/draft-ietf-mile-jsoniodef Hi Take > (2) [Question]DomainData, Address of Node should be exist > at the same time? Sorry, this comment is unnecessary. Because of my misunderstood "xs:choice". "xs:choice" with maxOccurs="unbounded" can select element at each reptition. So, DomainData and Address can exists at same time. And, I also confirm this XML Schema with XML validators(xmllint, msv). Finally, my comment is only this one. (1) Should apply ErrataID: 5398 (AlternativeIndicatorID) Errata ID: 5398 https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5398 CDDL in latest draft says: ``` AlternativeIndicatorID = { ? restriction: restriction .default "private" ? ext-restriction: text IndicatorReference: [+ IndicatorReference] } ``` It should say: ``` AlternativeIndicatorID = { ? restriction: restriction .default "private" ? ext-restriction: text IndicatorID: [+ IndicatorID] } ``` Best Regards, Takahiko Nagata _______________________________________________ mile mailing list mile@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mile
- [mile] review request on the json IODEF draft at … Takeshi Takahashi
- Re: [mile] review request on the json IODEF draft… Takahiko Nagata
- Re: [mile] review request on the json IODEF draft… Takahiko Nagata
- Re: [mile] review request on the json IODEF draft… Takeshi Takahashi