Re: [mile] [EXT] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft

Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay <jmfmckay@gmail.com> Mon, 21 October 2019 22:18 UTC

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Two more nits. When these and Danny's edits/questions are addressed, this
document is ready to move forward.

Thanks,
Jess

Section1: The sentence that starts "This extension does not attempt to
solve the vulnerability data format issue" is a run on sentence.

Section 3- The sentence that starts with "Note again" is a run on .



On Mon, Oct 21, 2019 at 5:34 PM Haynes Jr., Dan <dhaynes@mitre.org>; wrote:

> Hi Nancy and Stephen,
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> I have some minor nits and questions.
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>    - Abstract
>       - Is “Vulnerability” a defined term?
>    - Section 2
>       - Should this also reference RFC 8174?
>    - Section 3
>       - Change “Note again…any information that in is the abstract
>       realm…” to “Note again…any information that is in the abstract realm…”.
>    - Section 4
>       - Change “JSON based” to “JSON-based”.
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> Beyond that, I am comfortable with moving this draft forward.
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> Thanks,
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> Danny
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> *From: *mile <mile-bounces@ietf.org>; on behalf of "Nancy Cam-Winget
> (ncamwing)" <ncamwing@cisco.com>;
> *Date: *Monday, September 23, 2019 at 4:29 PM
> *To: *"mile@ietf.org"; <mile@ietf.org>;
> *Subject: *[EXT] [mile] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft
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> Fellow MILE participants,
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> This is a Working Group Last Call for
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-rolie-vuln/
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> Please provide your review and feedback to the draft’s readiness by Oct 21
> st so that we can move it forward.
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> Warm regards,
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>                 Nancy
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