Re: [mile] AD review of Implementation draft

Hi,

Thanks for the updates, inline.

On Tue, May 31, 2016 at 9:20 AM, Daisuke MIYAMOTO
<daisu-mi@nc.u-tokyo.ac.jp> wrote:
> Hello!
>
>  The revised version is available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-implementreport/
>
>> Section 1:
>>
>> We'll have trouble with http://siis.realmv6.org/implementations/ as a
>> stable reference, but I'm not sure what to do about that and will get
>> back to you.
>
> Thanks, current revision still includes this URL.

OK, this may come up as an issue, but I'll push on keeping this and
the other URLs that might not be considered stable by all.

>
>> Consider changing from:
>>    REN-ISAC also recommends to use of the IODEF attachment provided with
>>    the notification email be processed rather than relying on parsing of
>>    the email body text.  The interface provided by REN-ISAC are designed
>>    for dealing with such email.
>> To:
>>    REN-ISAC also recommends to use an IODEF attachment provided with
>>    a notification email for processing rather than relying on parsing of
>>    the email body text.  The interface provided by REN-ISAC are designed
>>    to handle such email.
>
> I concur.
>
>> Section 6.2
>> Is IDMEF expanded anywhere?  What is SNML?

What is SNML?  Maybe you answered that with a reference, I'm not sure though.

>
> IDMEF is RFC4765. I also added a reference for RFC4765.
>
>  In addition to that, I amended list items in Section 1
> (Introduction), in order to add appropriate references
> and adjust their order. (5070, 5070-bis, 5901, 5941, 6545,
> 6546, and 7203)
>
> #This is just a confirmation rather than question, but
> #shall we decide an abbreviated title of the draft asap?

I'd leave it as is since the file name will just become an RFC number
anyway, so it's not a big deal that it is long.

Thanks,
Kathleen

>
> Many thanks,
> Daisuke
>
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Best regards,
Kathleen