Re: [mile] [EXT] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft

Bill Munyan <bill.munyan.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 22 October 2019 13:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [mile] [EXT] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft
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MILE folks,
Once the nits from Danny & Jess are addressed, I am comfortable with this
document moving forward.

Cheers,
-Bill M.

On Mon, Oct 21, 2019 at 6:18 PM Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay <jmfmckay@gmail.com>;
wrote:

> Two more nits. When these and Danny's edits/questions are addressed, this
> document is ready to move forward.
>
> Thanks,
> Jess
>
> Section1: The sentence that starts "This extension does not attempt to
> solve the vulnerability data format issue" is a run on sentence.
>
> Section 3- The sentence that starts with "Note again" is a run on .
>
>
>
> On Mon, Oct 21, 2019 at 5:34 PM Haynes Jr., Dan <dhaynes@mitre.org>; wrote:
>
>> Hi Nancy and Stephen,
>>
>>
>>
>> I have some minor nits and questions.
>>
>>
>>
>>    - Abstract
>>       - Is “Vulnerability” a defined term?
>>    - Section 2
>>       - Should this also reference RFC 8174?
>>    - Section 3
>>       - Change “Note again…any information that in is the abstract
>>       realm…” to “Note again…any information that is in the abstract realm…”.
>>    - Section 4
>>       - Change “JSON based” to “JSON-based”.
>>
>>
>>
>> Beyond that, I am comfortable with moving this draft forward.
>>
>>
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> Danny
>>
>>
>>
>> *From: *mile <mile-bounces@ietf.org>; on behalf of "Nancy Cam-Winget
>> (ncamwing)" <ncamwing@cisco.com>;
>> *Date: *Monday, September 23, 2019 at 4:29 PM
>> *To: *"mile@ietf.org"; <mile@ietf.org>;
>> *Subject: *[EXT] [mile] WGLC for Vulnerability extension draft
>>
>>
>>
>> Fellow MILE participants,
>>
>>
>>
>> This is a Working Group Last Call for
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-rolie-vuln/
>>
>>
>>
>> Please provide your review and feedback to the draft’s readiness by Oct 21
>> st so that we can move it forward.
>>
>>
>>
>> Warm regards,
>>
>>                 Nancy
>>
>>
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