Re: [mile] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7970 (5423)

[Roman Danyliw <[e-mail]>]

Hello!

This proposed change is correct.  

Take: Thanks for the finding and reporting this correction.

Roman 

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> Subject: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7970 (5423)
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> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7970, "The Incident
> Object Description Exchange Format Version 2".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5423
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Takeshi Takahashi <[e-mail]>
> 
> Section: 8
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> <xs:element name="ThreatActor">
>       <xs:complexType>
>         <xs:sequence>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:ThreatActorID"
>                       minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:URL" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:Description"
>                       minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:AdditionalData"
>                       minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>         </xs:sequence>
>         <xs:attribute name="restriction"
>                       type="iodef:restriction-type" use="optional"/>
>         <xs:attribute name="ext-restriction"
>                       type="xs:string" use="optional"/>
>       </xs:complexType>
>     </xs:element>
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> <xs:element name="ThreatActor">
>       <xs:complexType>
>         <xs:sequence>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:ThreatActorID"
>                       minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:URL"
>                       minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:Description"
>                       minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>           <xs:element ref="iodef:AdditionalData"
>                       minOccurs="0" maxOccurs="unbounded"/>
>         </xs:sequence>
>         <xs:attribute name="restriction"
>                       type="iodef:restriction-type" use="optional"/>
>         <xs:attribute name="ext-restriction"
>                       type="xs:string" use="optional"/>
>       </xs:complexType>
>     </xs:element>
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The number of URL occurance could be zero, according to the main body
> text.
> The minOccurs of the URL in the TreatActorclass was defined.
> (The default value of minOccurs is one, not zero.)
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC7970 (draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-26)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : The Incident Object Description Exchange Format Version 2
> Publication Date    : November 2016
> Author(s)           : R. Danyliw
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Managed Incident Lightweight Exchange
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG