[MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Re: IETF LC: Minor comments on draft-ietf-mipshop-mis-ps-05

Thanks for your review. I've placed the editorial comments as RFC Editor
notes.

Jari

Gorry Fairhurst kirjoitti:
> I do not have any further substantial comments concerning this draft.
> For me, the issues I raised have been addressed, at least to an
> appropriate level for a problem statement.
>
> Here are 4 editorial comments, which you may fix in the next revision.
>
> best wishes,
>
>
> Gorry
>
> ---
>
> Page 8:
> /other standards bodies other than the IETF/
>  ^^^^^
> - remove "other"
>
> Page 11
> /arrive at a rate of hundreds of milliseconds/
> - I think this does not make sense, it should be "at an interval of
> hundreds of milliseconds".
>
> Page 11
> /to around 65000 bytes/
>     ^^^^^^
> - I can see that it may be hard to quantify, but given the maximum
> segment size allowed by UDP, it would be good to be clear if you
> expect it to be normally less than 64KB, but may be greater than 64 KB.
>
> Page 15
> /TR2.The transport protocol shall be capable to support both IPv4
>       and IPv6 versions/
> /TR2.The transport protocol shall be able to operate over both the IPv4
>       and IPv6 network layer/
>
>
>
>

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