RE: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd
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Hi, Here are my proposed changes. I wanted to use track changes in word for better tracking the proposed changes, but for some reason I lost the tracking. Changes can be made visible using http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff, and the Html wdiff option. I also include herein the version -02 of the dhcp discovery draft, which I plan to submit shortly, for the case you want to crosscheck for terminology consistencies. Comments are welcome! - gabor -----Original Message----- From: ext Nada Golmie [mailto:nada.golmie@nist.gov] Sent: Sunday, January 20, 2008 7:39 PM To: Bajko Gabor (Nokia-OCTO/MtView) Cc: mipshop-mih-dt@ietf.org Subject: Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Hi Gabor, Telemaco submitted the latest version in December. I did not update the draft yet since the changes I was making were minor. Go ahead with the changes for section 5. At this point we probably can wait to make all the changes before resubmitting. -Nada Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com wrote: > Nada, > > Did you submit the new version of the draft? I would have some > suggested changes to section 5.1 and 5.2, but not able to provide it > until Thursday. Also, section 5.3 needs way more text, I could perhaps > handle this one too if I get help from Subir, but this needs to wait > till February. > > - gabor > > -----Original Message----- > From: ext Nada Golmie [mailto:nada.golmie@nist.gov] > Sent: Friday, January 11, 2008 12:04 PM > To: Telemaco Melia > Cc: mipshop-mih-dt@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd > > Happy New Year! > > Best wishes to everyone for a successful, prosperous and peaceful 2008! > > As promised -and apologies for the delay- here is a suggested change > to the transport section: > > In section 6.5 general guidelines: > Replace the sentence > "The server side MUST support both UDP and TCP for MIH transport, and > the MN MAY support either TCP or UD.." > with > "MOS server MUST support both UDP and TCP for MIH transport and the MN > MUST support TCP" > > We may have to go through Srini's comments and come up with additional > changes. Should we schedule a telecon for that? Any other thoughts? > > Best wishes, > > -Nada > > Telemaco Melia wrote: > >> I think we need to: >> - address Srini's comments >> - address Cheng Hong' s comments >> - update the text about the transport recommendation as agreed in >> Vancouver >> >> Anything missing? >> >> tele >> >> >> Nada Golmie ha scritto: >> >>> Hi Telemaco, >>> >>> No problem. To do that though, I would need the list of agreed upon >>> edits. Do we have such a list? >>> Alternatively, let's circulate edits on the mailing list. I will >>> capture that before January 3rd. >>> >>> -Nada >>> >>> >>> Telemaco Melia wrote: >>> >>>> Guys, >>>> >>>> Due to my removal I will not be able to edit the document until the >>>> first week of Jan. >>>> I just posted as -00 version the document we presented in Vancouver. >>>> Please find attached the xml source. I use xmlMind to edit and >>>> xml2rfc to convert...pretty handy tools. >>>> >>>> Nada would you mind to take over the editorial leadership? >>>> >>>> Thanks for your support and Merry Christmas to you all. >>>> >>>> Regards, >>>> Tele >>>> >>>> >>>> >>>> ------------------------------------------------------------------- >>>> - >>>> ---- >>>> >>>> >>>> _______________________________________________ >>>> MIPSHOP-MIH-DT mailing list >>>> MIPSHOP-MIH-DT@ietf.org >>>> https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mipshop-mih-dt >>>> >>> > > > -- > Nada Golmie, Ph.D. > Manager, High Speed Network Technologies Group National Institute of > Standards and Technology 100 Bureau Dr. Stop 8920 Gaithersburg, MD > 20899 > Email: nada@nist.gov > Phone: (301) 975-4190 > Fax: (301) 590-0932 > Web: http://w3.antd.nist.gov > > > > > _______________________________________________ > MIPSHOP-MIH-DT mailing list > MIPSHOP-MIH-DT@ietf.org > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mipshop-mih-dt > > _______________________________________________ > MIPSHOP-MIH-DT mailing list > MIPSHOP-MIH-DT@ietf.org > https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mipshop-mih-dt >
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- [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Telemaco Melia
- Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Nada Golmie
- Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Telemaco Melia
- Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Nada Golmie
- RE: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Gabor.Bajko
- Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Nada Golmie
- Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Telemaco
- RE: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd Gabor.Bajko