RE: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd

<Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com> Wed, 30 January 2008 22:14 UTC

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Hi,

Here are my proposed changes. I wanted to use track changes in word for
better tracking the proposed changes, but for some reason I lost the
tracking. Changes can be made visible using
http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff, and the Html wdiff option. I also include
herein the version -02 of the dhcp discovery draft, which I plan to
submit shortly, for the case you want to crosscheck for terminology
consistencies.

Comments are welcome!

- gabor 

-----Original Message-----
From: ext Nada Golmie [mailto:nada.golmie@nist.gov] 
Sent: Sunday, January 20, 2008 7:39 PM
To: Bajko Gabor (Nokia-OCTO/MtView)
Cc: mipshop-mih-dt@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd

Hi Gabor,

Telemaco submitted the latest version in December. I did not update the
draft yet since the changes I was making were minor.
Go ahead with the changes for section 5. At this point we probably can
wait to make all the changes before resubmitting.

-Nada


Gabor.Bajko@nokia.com wrote:
> Nada,
>
> Did you submit the new version of the draft? I would have some 
> suggested changes to section 5.1 and 5.2, but not able to provide it 
> until Thursday. Also, section 5.3 needs way more text, I could perhaps

> handle this one too if I get help from Subir, but this needs to wait 
> till February.
>
> - gabor
>
> -----Original Message-----
> From: ext Nada Golmie [mailto:nada.golmie@nist.gov]
> Sent: Friday, January 11, 2008 12:04 PM
> To: Telemaco Melia
> Cc: mipshop-mih-dt@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [MIPSHOP-MIH-DT] Editorial work up to Jan 3rd
>
> Happy New Year!
>
> Best wishes to everyone for a successful, prosperous and peaceful
2008!
>
> As promised -and apologies for the delay-  here is a suggested change 
> to the transport section:
>
> In section 6.5 general guidelines:
> Replace the sentence
> "The server side MUST support both UDP and TCP for MIH transport, and 
> the MN MAY support either TCP or UD.."
> with
> "MOS server MUST support both UDP and TCP for MIH transport and the MN

> MUST support TCP"
>
> We may have to go through Srini's comments and come up with additional

> changes. Should we schedule a telecon for that? Any other thoughts?
>
> Best wishes,
>
> -Nada
>
> Telemaco Melia wrote:
>   
>> I think we need to:
>> - address Srini's comments
>> - address Cheng Hong' s comments
>> - update the text about the transport  recommendation as agreed in 
>> Vancouver
>>
>> Anything missing?
>>
>> tele
>>
>>
>> Nada Golmie ha scritto:
>>     
>>> Hi Telemaco,
>>>
>>> No problem.  To do that though, I would need the list of agreed upon

>>> edits. Do we have such a list?
>>> Alternatively, let's circulate edits on the mailing list. I will 
>>> capture that before January 3rd.
>>>
>>> -Nada
>>>
>>>
>>> Telemaco Melia wrote:
>>>       
>>>> Guys,
>>>>
>>>> Due to my removal I will not be able to edit the document until the

>>>> first week of Jan.
>>>> I just posted as -00 version the document we presented in
Vancouver.
>>>> Please find attached the xml source. I use xmlMind to edit and 
>>>> xml2rfc to convert...pretty handy tools.
>>>>
>>>> Nada would you mind to take over the editorial leadership?
>>>>
>>>> Thanks for your support and Merry Christmas to you all.
>>>>
>>>> Regards,
>>>> Tele
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
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