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Re: [MMUSIC] 1 week WGLC on recent changes to draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp (-14 to -16)

Christian Groves <Christian.Groves@nteczone.com> Fri, 20 January 2017 06:54 UTC

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To: Flemming Andreasen <fandreas@cisco.com>, mmusic <mmusic@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] 1 week WGLC on recent changes to draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp (-14 to -16)
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A couple of nits:

Cl. 5.1 Extraneous ",":  "...Endpoints MUST support the cipher suites as 
defined in
    [I-D.ietf-mmusic-4572-update].<,>

Cl. 5.3 Para 2: The first sentence should probably use the same 
formulation as paragraph 3, "... that requires the establishment of..."

Cl. 5.4 Note - Missing "s" : "...an answer that include<s>.."

Cl. 6 Para 1 - Spelling error: "mechansim" -> "mechanism"

Otherwise OK.

Regards, Christian


On 19/01/2017 9:24 AM, Flemming Andreasen wrote:
> Greetings
>
> We previously completed WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp, however 
> there has been some updates to the draft subsequently. We are hereby 
> issuing a 1 week WGLC on the the changes from -14 to -16 only, as 
> indicated by the following URL:
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-14&url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-16 
>
>
> If you have any comments on the updates, please provide those by 
> Wednesday, January 25. Comments should be sent to the document authors 
> and the MMUSIC WG list.
>
> Thanks
>
> -- Flemming (as MMUSIC co-chair)
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