[MMUSIC] RID: A couple of minor editorial comments on example in section 11.1

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Fri, 23 October 2015 13:42 UTC

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Hi,

A couple of minor editorial comments on the example in section 11.1.

Q1:                      While it is stated that some lines are skipped, I think it would be useful to include the SDP group:BUNDLE attribute.

Q2:                      If the example is showing the first offer, then different port values should be used. Then there could then be a statement saying that, once BUNDLE has been negotiated, the same port values will be used for all m- lines.

Regards,

Christer