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Re: [MMUSIC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-22

"MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com> Sun, 19 July 2020 14:17 UTC

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From: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-22
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Sunday, July 19, 2020 3:26 AM
> To: MORTON, ALFRED C (AL) <acm@research.att.com>; ops-dir@ietf.org
> Cc: last-call@ietf.org; draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-
> channel.all@ietf.org; mmusic@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-
> channel-22
> 
> Hi Al,
> 
> Thank You for the review! Please see inline.
> 
> >Reviewer: Al Morton
> >Review result: Has Nits
> >
> >OPS-DIR review of MSRP over Data Channels
> >draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-21
<snip>
> Nits:
> 
> >2.  Conventions
> >   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALLNOT",
> s/"SHALLNOT"/"SHALL NOT"/
> 
> This has been fixed in version -22. Maybe you were looking at version -21?
[acm] 
Yes, when I asked for the html-ized tools version, -21 is the version that appeared,
and I recorded this in the beginning of the review.  I don't control the subject line or
header generated by the review tool.

Al

> 
> Regards,
> 
> Christer
> 
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