Re: [MMUSIC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34

Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Tue, 09 April 2019 17:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34
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On 4/9/19 12:10 PM, Paul Kyzivat wrote:
> The context for this is:
>
> "Attribute scopes in addition to media- and session- specific may 
> also..."
>
> The space was intentional so that there are equivalent constructions 
> for "media" and "session". The intent is as a shorthand for:
>
> "Attribute scopes in addition to media-specific and session-specific 
> may also..."


For what it's worth, Zitao is correct.

RFC 7322 §1:

    The world of technical publishing has generally accepted rules for
    grammar, punctuation, capitalization, sentence length and complexity,
    parallelism, etc.  The RFC Editor generally follows these accepted
    rules as defined by the Chicago Manual of Style (CMOS) [CMOS]...


CMOS 15th ed §7.89:

    "When the second part of a hyphenated expression is omitted, the
    hyphen is retained, followed by a word space.

    "/fifteen- and twenty-year mortgages/

    "/Chicago- or Milwaukee-bound passengers/"


> To avoid confusion I think I'll just change to the latter.


That works too.

/a