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Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16

Keith Drage <drageke@ntlworld.com> Sun, 10 May 2020 21:43 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16
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This would be better worded as:

In RFC 4975, MSRP is defined to work over TCP and TLS connections, and 
over a WebSocket subprotocol specified by [RFC7977]."


Keith

On 10/05/2020 22:07, Gunnar Hellström wrote:
>
> Hi,
>
> A minor observation.
>
> In the introducttion, first paragraph, the sentence:
> "MSRP is currently defined to work over TCP and TLS connections, and 
> over a WebSocket subprotocol specified by [RFC7977 
> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7977>]."
>
> The word "currently" will not be well selected if this specification 
> gets approved and published.
>
> I suggest:
>
> "MSRP was initially in RFC 4975 defined to work over TCP and TLS 
> connections, and over a WebSocket subprotocol specified by [RFC7977 
> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7977>]."
>
> Regards
>
> Gunnar
>
>
> Den 2020-05-06 kl. 17:20, skrev Bo Burman:
>>
>> Greetings MMUSIC ,
>>
>> This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16 
>>
>>
>> as Proposed Standard. Please review and provide any comments you may 
>> have on the document by
>>
>> Wednesday, May 20, 2020.
>>
>> Comments should be sent to the document authors and the MMUSIC WG list.
>>
>> If you review the document but do not have any comments, please send 
>> a note to that effect as well.
>>
>> Thanks,
>>
>> /Bo
>>
>> (MMUSIC co-chair)
>>
>>
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