Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-15

Ari Keränen <ari.keranen@ericsson.com> Sun, 26 May 2013 22:07 UTC

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Hi,

Here's a few editorial things worth considering fixing.


3.  Solution Overview

    9.   When the client has concluded its connectivity checks, including
         promoting candidates, and has correspondingly received the

s/promoting candidates/nominating candidate pairs/
(using "promoting/promoted" also later in the document)


4.2.  ICE Candidate Transport Header Parameter

    <component-id>: [...]
    It MUST start at 1 and MUST increment by 1 for each component
    of a particular candidate

s/of a particular candidate/of a particular media stream/


In section 6.4 you talk about "SO" connection types; makes sense to 
expand that into "Simultaneous Open".


Cheers,
Ari (as individual)