Re: [MMUSIC] my review of draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-02

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Mon, 15 June 2015 15:00 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] my review of draft-ietf-mmusic-data-channel-sdpneg-02
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On 6/15/15 8:49 AM, Juergen Stoetzer-Bradler wrote:

>> 8.In section  6.2.2 “By definition max-retr and max-time are mutually
>> exclusive, so only one  of them can be present in a=dcmap.” Suggest
>> MUST be present.
>>
> [Juergen] As it is also allowed to neither specify max-retr nor
> max-time, would you agree if we said the following?
> "/By definition max-retr and max-time are mutually exclusive, so at most
> one of them MUST be present in a=dcmap/"

That construction seems very awkward. I suggest:

"By definition max-retr and max-time are mutually exclusive, so at most 
one of them MAY be present in a=dcmap."

	Thanks,
	Paul