Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16

Thanks, Bo, all changes incorporated in pull request

https://github.com/josemrecio/draft-msrp-data-channel/pull/12

JM


On 09/05/20 03:49, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> Hi Bo,
>
> Thank You for the comments! Please see inline.
>
>> Taking Christer’s proposed changes to Paul’s comments into account, I think this is in pretty good shape.
>> These are my -16 review comments:
>>   
>> 1) NIT:
>> In section 1, suggest changing “RTCWeb” to “WebRTC” since I assume the technology rather than the IETF WG is meant?
> Correct. Will modify as suggested.
>
> ---
>
>> 2) MINOR:
>> In sections 3.1 and 4.3 the subprotocol parameter values use capital “MSRP”. Based on Paul’s comment #6 that there is an existing IANA “msrp” registration,
>> I think you should use lowercase, because that IANA registry is case-sensitive (see https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7936#section-2)
> Correct. Will be fixed.
>
> ---
>
>> 3) NIT:
>> Sections 4.6, 4.7, and 4.8 use ‘“m” line’; suggest aligning with many other recent documents and add an equal sign to use ‘“m=” line’ instead.
> Will modify as suggested.
>
> ---
>
>> 4) MINOR:
>> In section 7.2, you use MMUSIC Chairs as contact; please use IESG and mailto:iesg@ietf.org instead to align with recent practice and avoid becoming dependent on the existence of a WG.
> Will modify as suggested.
>
> Thanks!
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
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>
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> From: Bo Burman <bo.burman@ericsson.com>
> Sent: den 6 maj 2020 17:21
> To: mmusic <mmusic@ietf.org>
> Cc: mmusic-chairs@ietf.org
> Subject: WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16
>   
> Greetings MMUSIC ,
>
> This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft:
>
>      https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16
>
> as Proposed Standard. Please review and provide any comments you may have on the document by
> Wednesday, May 20, 2020.
>   
> Comments should be sent to the document authors and the MMUSIC WG list.
> If you review the document but do not have any comments, please send a note to that effect as well.
>
> Thanks,
>
> /Bo
> (MMUSIC co-chair)
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