Re: [MMUSIC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4583 (4111)

"Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com> Fri, 19 September 2014 19:43 UTC

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From: "Charles Eckel (eckelcu)" <eckelcu@cisco.com>
To: Christian Groves <Christian.Groves@nteczone.com>, Tom Kristensen <2mkristensen@gmail.com>, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
Thread-Topic: [MMUSIC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4583 (4111)
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC4583 (4111)
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Yes, please do. The BFCPBIS WG does not have plans to update RFC 5239, so
an errata would be helpful.

Cheers,
Charles

On 9/16/14, 6:47 AM, "Christian Groves" <Christian.Groves@nteczone.com>
wrote:

>Hello Tom,
>
>Ah, I missed the bis document. Good to see it's addressed. RFC5239 also
>has the same issue in clause 8.4 where it uses m-stream. Its probably
>worth an errata also.
>
>Regards, Christian
>
>On 16/09/2014 5:11 PM, Tom Kristensen wrote:
>> Well spotted!
>>
>> This is addressed and fixed in rfc4583bis.
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis (a new
>> version of this draft will be submitted very soon).
>>
>> Cf. Section 6, where this paragraph is added:
>>
>>     "Note: In [15
>> <https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-09#ref-15>]
>> 'm-stream' was erroneously used in Section 10
>> 
>><https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bfcpbis-rfc4583bis-09#section-10>
>>.
>>     Although the example was non-normative, it is implemented by some
>>     vendors and occurs in cases where the endpoint is willing to act as
>>     an server.  Therefore, it is RECOMMENDED to support parsing and
>>     interpreting 'm-stream' the same way as 'mstrm' when receiving."
>> In the example pointed to in the errate, we are now using the correct
>>string for the floorid attribute:
>>    "a=floorid:1 mstrm:10
>>     a=floorid:2 mstrm:11"
>> -- Tom
>>
>> On 15 September 2014 04:30, RFC Errata System
>> <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org <mailto:rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>> wrote:
>>
>>     The following errata report has been submitted for RFC4583,
>>     "Session Description Protocol (SDP) Format for Binary Floor
>>     Control Protocol (BFCP) Streams".
>>
>>     --------------------------------------
>>     You may review the report below and at:
>>     http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=4583&eid=4111
>>
>>     --------------------------------------
>>     Type: Editorial
>>     Reported by: Christian Groves <Christian.Groves@nteczone.com
>>     <mailto:Christian.Groves@nteczone.com>>
>>
>>     Section: 9
>>
>>     Original Text
>>     -------------
>>     For the purpose of brevity, the main portion of the session
>>        description is omitted in the examples, which only show 'm'
>>     lines and
>>        their attributes.
>>
>>        The following is an example of an offer sent by a conference
>>server
>>        to a client.
>>
>>        m=application 50000 TCP/TLS/BFCP *
>>        a=setup:passive
>>        a=connection:new
>>        a=fingerprint:SHA-1 \
>>     4A:AD:B9:B1:3F:82:18:3B:54:02:12:DF:3E:5D:49:6B:19:E5:7C:AB
>>        a=floorctrl:s-only
>>        a=confid:4321
>>        a=userid:1234
>>        a=floorid:1 m-stream:10
>>        a=floorid:2 m-stream:11
>>        m=audio 50002 RTP/AVP 0
>>        a=label:10
>>        m=video 50004 RTP/AVP 31
>>        a=label:11
>>
>>     ...
>>
>>     Corrected Text
>>     --------------
>>     For the purpose of brevity, the main portion of the session
>>        description is omitted in the examples, which only show 'm'
>>     lines and
>>        their attributes.
>>
>>        The following is an example of an offer sent by a conference
>>server
>>        to a client.
>>
>>        m=application 50000 TCP/TLS/BFCP *
>>        a=setup:passive
>>        a=connection:new
>>        a=fingerprint:SHA-1 \
>>     4A:AD:B9:B1:3F:82:18:3B:54:02:12:DF:3E:5D:49:6B:19:E5:7C:AB
>>        a=floorctrl:s-only
>>        a=confid:4321
>>        a=userid:1234
>>        a=floorid:1 mstrm:10
>>        a=floorid:2 mstrm:11
>>        m=audio 50002 RTP/AVP 0
>>        a=label:10
>>        m=video 50004 RTP/AVP 31
>>        a=label:11
>>
>>     ...
>>
>>     Notes
>>     -----
>>     In section 6 of the RFC the ABNF for the "floorid" attribute is:
>>       floor-id-attribute = "a=floorid:" token [" mstrm:" token *(SP
>>     token)]
>>
>>     The text string " mstrm:" is used to reference the media stream
>>     rather than "m-stream" that appears in the examples.
>>
>>     Instructions:
>>     -------------
>>     This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
>>     use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
>>     rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
>>     can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
>>
>>     --------------------------------------
>>     RFC4583 (draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bfcp-03)
>>     --------------------------------------
>>     Title               : Session Description Protocol (SDP) Format
>>     for Binary Floor Control Protocol (BFCP) Streams
>>     Publication Date    : November 2006
>>     Author(s)           : G. Camarillo
>>     Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>>     Source              : Multiparty Multimedia Session Control
>>     Area                : Real-time Applications and Infrastructure
>>     Stream              : IETF
>>     Verifying Party     : IESG
>>
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