Re: [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26
Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Wed, 12 July 2017 19:39 UTC
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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp.all@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26
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Thanks! :) Regards, Christer -----Original Message----- From: Paul Kyzivat [mailto:pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu] Sent: 12 July 2017 21:32 To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>; draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp.all@ietf.org Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org>; IETF MMUSIC WG <mmusic@ietf.org> Subject: Re: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26 On 7/12/17 8:58 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote: > Hi Paul, > > Are you ok with my reply? Yes. Thanks, Paul > Regards, > > Christer > > > > On 10/07/17 12:02, "Christer Holmberg" > <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> > wrote: > >> Pull request: https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-dtls-sdp/pull/33 >> >> (I kept the example in Section 8, but I fixed the reference) >> >> Regards, >> >> Christer >> >> >> On 10/07/17 11:08, "Christer Holmberg" >> <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> >> wrote: >> >>> Hi Paul, >>> >>> Thanks for your review! Please see inline. >>> >>> >>>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >>>> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by >>>> the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like >>>> any other last call comments. For more information, please see the >>>> FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. >>>> >>>> Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-26 >>>> Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat >>>> Review Date: 2017-07-07 >>>> IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24 >>>> IESG Telechat date: TBD >>>> >>>> Summary: >>>> >>>> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a few nits >>>> that should be fixed before publication. >>>> >>>> Issues: >>>> >>>> Major: 0 >>>> Minor: 0 >>>> Nits: 4 >>>> >>>> (1) NIT: >>>> >>>> Section 5.3: s/Eventhough/Even though/ >>> >>> Will be fixed. >>> >>>> (2) NIT: >>>> >>>> Section 8: s/aTLS/a TLS/ >>> >>> Will be fixed. >>> >>>> (3) NIT: >>>> >>>> Section 8: What is the point of including the example? I don't see >>>> how it adds anything. Perhaps worked out O/A examples contrasting >>>> the differences between the new and existing cases might be >>>> marginally helpful. (But IMO not enough to bother with.) >>> >>> The idea was to take the existing example from RFC 4572 (I note the >>> reference is wrong: s/3261/4572), and show how it looks with the >>> tls-id attribute. >>> >>> >>>> (4) NIT: >>>> >>>> Section 10.3.2: s/Througout/throughout/ >>> >>> Will be fixed. >>> >>> Regards, >>> >>> Christer >>> >> >
- [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-m… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ie… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ie… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ie… Christer Holmberg
- Re: [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ie… Paul Kyzivat
- Re: [MMUSIC] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ie… Christer Holmberg