Re: [MMUSIC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-22

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Sun, 19 July 2020 19:33 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: "MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)" <acm@research.att.com>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-22
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Hi,

>> Nits:
>> 
>>>2.  Conventions
>>>   The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALLNOT",
>>>   s/"SHALLNOT"/"SHALL NOT"/
>> 
>> This has been fixed in version -22. Maybe you were looking at version -21?
>[acm]
>Yes, when I asked for the html-ized tools version, -21 is the version that appeared, and I recorded this in the beginning of the review.  I don't control the subject line or header generated by the review tool.

When you were assigned the review, -21 was the latest version :)

(I submitted a new version once the Gen-Art review issues had been solved.)

Regards,

Christer