Re: [MMUSIC] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04: (with COMMENT)

[Benjamin Kaduk <[e-mail]>]

Hi Christer,

Just some mundane bits, inline...

On Thu, Aug 26, 2021 at 05:33:49PM +0000, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> Section 9.1. , paragraph 6, nit:
> > er for an offerer and answerer to always be able to associate an RTP stream w
> >                                   ^^^^^^^^^
> >The adverb "always" usually goes after the verb "be".
> 
> English is not my first language, but "to be always able to" sounds weird to me.
> 
> But, if someone tells me it is the correct grammar I have no problem changing it :)

Your intuition is correct; no change is needed here.

> >These URLs point to tools.ietf.org, which is being deprecated:
> > * https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-07
> 
> The reference is used in Section 9.2., in the following sentence:
> 
> "Layer Refresh Request (LRR):  (PT=PSFB, FMT=10) [LLR-RTCP]."
> 
> Has it been replaced with something else? If not, as the reference is information, I assume we can just remove it, and the sentence where it is used.

The datatracker will replace the tools site; following the link even now
redirects to https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-avtext-lrr-07
which is expected to remain stable.

-Ben