Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-15

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Mon, 27 May 2013 09:59 UTC

Return-Path: <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
X-Original-To: mmusic@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: mmusic@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id B215021F92EB for <mmusic@ietfa.amsl.com>; Mon, 27 May 2013 02:59:44 -0700 (PDT)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -105.949
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-105.949 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-2.599, HELO_EQ_SE=0.35, MIME_8BIT_HEADER=0.3, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_MED=-4, USER_IN_WHITELIST=-100]
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([12.22.58.30]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id FYKlfCWcgFJH for <mmusic@ietfa.amsl.com>; Mon, 27 May 2013 02:59:39 -0700 (PDT)
Received: from mailgw1.ericsson.se (mailgw1.ericsson.se [193.180.251.45]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 1703921F90FD for <mmusic@ietf.org>; Mon, 27 May 2013 02:59:38 -0700 (PDT)
X-AuditID: c1b4fb2d-b7fe36d000007102-df-51a32e89fcb1
Received: from esessmw0247.eemea.ericsson.se (Unknown_Domain [153.88.253.125]) by mailgw1.ericsson.se (Symantec Mail Security) with SMTP id 0D.62.28930.98E23A15; Mon, 27 May 2013 11:59:37 +0200 (CEST)
Received: from [127.0.0.1] (153.88.115.8) by esessmw0247.eemea.ericsson.se (153.88.115.94) with Microsoft SMTP Server id 8.3.279.1; Mon, 27 May 2013 11:59:37 +0200
Message-ID: <51A32E8B.7030909@ericsson.com>
Date: Mon, 27 May 2013 11:59:39 +0200
From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; rv:17.0) Gecko/20130509 Thunderbird/17.0.6
MIME-Version: 1.0
To: =?ISO-8859-1?Q?Ari_Ker=E4nen?= <ari.keranen@ericsson.com>
References: <519638D5.9030301@cisco.com> <51A28787.3090709@ericsson.com>
In-Reply-To: <51A28787.3090709@ericsson.com>
X-Enigmail-Version: 1.5.1
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="ISO-8859-1"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
X-Brightmail-Tracker: H4sIAAAAAAAAA+NgFupjluLIzCtJLcpLzFFi42KZGfG3VrdTb3Ggwe/P/Bbtb44wWUxd/pjF gcljyZKfTB5fLn9mC2CK4rJJSc3JLEst0rdL4Mo4uu0bU8EW7oqby2azNzD+4ehi5OCQEDCR WPWtvIuRE8gUk7hwbz1bFyMXh5DAKUaJJx/Ps0M4yxkldv+7yQpSxSugLbHqTAM7SDOLgKrE nj3aIGE2AQuJmz8a2UBsUYFgiSPbN7NAlAtKnJz5BMwWEbCVmHN1LTuIzSzgLnH00HdmkDHC As4Sm9bkgISFBDwkHh66BjaGU0BH4tHeG6wQt0lKbHnRDtWqJzHlagsjhC0v0bx1NjNEr7ZE Q1MH6wRGoVlINs9C0jILScsCRuZVjOy5iZk56eWGmxiBYXpwy2/dHYynzokcYpTmYFES59Xj XRwoJJCeWJKanZpakFoUX1Sak1p8iJGJg1OqgZEtmeMS836ma1HW2o2NJg3rfm7ndPQRLmea XHJqQeuHllu10p/C3+1UusnvHTKVoyd+lbC1pELKueLPems5D56TSV3+w7TUZEf56YPxZ9rP 3Fi3/ap79MzzR79m7ZwR+eLoeY3s0owl3b15d+IjrshNZFnd25168eBuB9W4OZmzE7SdT96Y +0SJpTgj0VCLuag4EQA5MCpdIQIAAA==
Cc: draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat@tools.ietf.org, mmusic <mmusic@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] 1 Week WGLC for draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-15
X-BeenThere: mmusic@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.12
Precedence: list
List-Id: Multiparty Multimedia Session Control Working Group <mmusic.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/mmusic>, <mailto:mmusic-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/mmusic>
List-Post: <mailto:mmusic@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:mmusic-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mmusic>, <mailto:mmusic-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Mon, 27 May 2013 09:59:44 -0000

Hi Ari,

Thanks for these fixes. I have implemented them:

http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rtsp-nat-16

Cheers

Magnus

On 2013-05-27 00:07, Ari Keränen wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Here's a few editorial things worth considering fixing.
> 
> 
> 3.  Solution Overview
> 
>    9.   When the client has concluded its connectivity checks, including
>         promoting candidates, and has correspondingly received the
> 
> s/promoting candidates/nominating candidate pairs/
> (using "promoting/promoted" also later in the document)
> 
> 
> 4.2.  ICE Candidate Transport Header Parameter
> 
>    <component-id>: [...]
>    It MUST start at 1 and MUST increment by 1 for each component
>    of a particular candidate
> 
> s/of a particular candidate/of a particular media stream/
> 
> 
> In section 6.4 you talk about "SO" connection types; makes sense to
> expand that into "Simultaneous Open".
> 
> 
> Cheers,
> Ari (as individual)
> 
> 


-- 

Magnus Westerlund

----------------------------------------------------------------------
Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVM
----------------------------------------------------------------------
Ericsson AB                | Phone  +46 10 7148287
Färögatan 6                | Mobile +46 73 0949079
SE-164 80 Stockholm, Sweden| mailto: magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com
----------------------------------------------------------------------