Re: [MMUSIC] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04
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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Claudio Allocchio <Claudio.Allocchio@garr.it>, "art@ietf.org"
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Thanks Claudio for your review! I balloted No objection. Francesca On 09/08/2021, 23:59, "Claudio Allocchio via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote: Reviewer: Claudio Allocchio Review result: Ready The document is consistent and ready for publication. Just as a style comment: section 1.4 is a bit unusual in an RFC, specifically by mentioning what happened during one IETF meeting, etc. Nothing wrong with it but it mixes a specification (the RFC resulting for publication) with historic actions. Maybe there is a way to avoid this by changing a bit the text of the 1.4 section. Another comment: again all fine! but when a document like this updates/fixes other documents, including errata, new text replacing sections in other documents, etc, the implementer has a challenging task in putting the pieces together. I'd for the future suggest not to use this "amendment" technique, but to publish complete updated RFCs versions instead.
- [MMUSIC] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-mm… Claudio Allocchio via Datatracker
- Re: [MMUSIC] Artart last call review of draft-iet… Francesca Palombini