Re: [MMUSIC] Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-12.txt

Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu> Tue, 23 September 2014 19:30 UTC

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Nits:

There are a number of places where things are erroneously indented. The 
ones I noticed are:

- A couple of the paragraphs after the exmple in 6.11

- first line of the paragraph after the example in 6.13

I think this is a bug in xml2rfc.

	Thanks,
	Paul

On 9/23/14 1:33 PM, Ali C. Begen (abegen) wrote:
> A revision for the 4566bis has been submitted. This draft has substantial edits by Paul K. It attempts to provide more proper attribute definitions. Paul will send an email to the list asking for reviews. Please spare some time and review the changes.
>
> Also this draft refers to the avtext's rtp grouping taxonomy definitions.
>
> Begin forwarded message:
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>> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-12.txt
>> Date: September 23, 2014 at 11:29:22 AM MDT
>> To: Van Jacobson <van@parc.com>om>, "Mark J. Handley" <m.handley@cs.ucl.ac.uk>uk>, "Ali C. Begen" <abegen@cisco.com>om>, "Dr. Colin Perkins" <csp@csperkins.org>rg>, Colin Perkins <csp@csperkins.org>rg>, Van Jacobson <van@parc.com>om>, Ali Begen <abegen@cisco.com>om>, Mark Handley <m.handley@cs.ucl.ac.uk>
>>
>>
>> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-12.txt
>> has been successfully submitted by Ali Begen and posted to the
>> IETF repository.
>>
>> Name:		draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis
>> Revision:	12
>> Title:		SDP: Session Description Protocol
>> Document date:	2014-09-23
>> Group:		mmusic
>> Pages:		58
>> URL:            http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-12.txt
>> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis/
>> Htmlized:       http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-12
>> Diff:           http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-12
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This memo defines the Session Description Protocol (SDP).  SDP is
>>    intended for describing multimedia sessions for the purposes of
>>    session announcement, session invitation, and other forms of
>>    multimedia session initiation.  This document obsoletes RFC 4566.
>>
>>
>>
>>
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