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Re: [MMUSIC] New version of SDP UKS draft

Iñaki Baz Castillo <ibc@aliax.net> Fri, 21 April 2017 17:31 UTC

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From: Iñaki Baz Castillo <ibc@aliax.net>
Date: Fri, 21 Apr 2017 19:31:03 +0200
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] New version of SDP UKS draft
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2017-04-20 12:52 GMT+02:00 Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com>:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-thomson-mmusic-sdp-uks
>
> Inspired by Christer updating the dtls-sdp draft, I have updated the
> SDP UKS draft to match the recent changes (thanks Christer!).
>
> I found a few minor errors while editing this.  I'd appreciate it if
> people can take a look and see if it is ready.  I'm biased, but I
> think that it's in reasonable shape.


In section 2:

      By substituting the the fingerprint

(double "the").


Also in section 2:

   In usages of TLS and DTLS that use SDP for negotiation, an endpoint
   is able to acquire the certificate fingerprint another entity.

(*of* another entity).


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Iñaki Baz Castillo
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