Re: [MMUSIC] Draft new version: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-02

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Tue, 08 December 2015 21:13 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Draft new version: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-02
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Hi,

>Section 8 consists solely of section 8.1. The 8.1 is redundant.

Correct. There was supposed to be a chapter 8.2 too, and when it was removed I forgot to fix the rest.

>Section 10 looks a little weird, because it has the section numbering for the updated documents mixed >in with the section numbering of this document. I'm not sure of long term plans. Is this stuff to >eventually be removed once everyone agrees on what is to be done? Or is it to remain? If it is going to >be removed, then what you have is fine. If it is going to stay, then I think something needs to be done >to make the presentation less confusing. (E.g., indent it and/or move into an appendix.)

I don't think it is going to be removed. This document updates the listed RFC, and the updated text will not be anywhere else (unless someone decides to incorporate the text into a bis, which at least is not my intention).

We can look at the section numbering, and see whether it can be made more clear. Perhaps the section number of the updated sections don't need to be in the updated text, as we already say which sections are updated. 

Regards,

Christer


On 12/8/15 2:48 AM, Christer Holmberg wrote:
> Hi,
>
> A new version (-02) of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-02 has been submitted.
>
> Note that this version now suggests updates to RFC 5763 (SRTP-DTLS) 
> and RFC 7341 (UDPTL-DTLS), so I encourage people to take a look.
>
> In addition, there is some new text about re-using connection-oriented
> (read: acknowledged packet delivery) for establishing a new DTLS 
> association.
>
> You can also find the document on github:
> https://github.com/cdh4u/draft-dtls-sdp
>
> (NOTE: This is my personal repo, as I am not aware of any "official"
> MMUSIC repo)
>
> Regards,
>
> Christer
>
>
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