Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16

Gunnar Hellström <gunnar.hellstrom@ghaccess.se> Sun, 10 May 2020 21:07 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16
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Hi,

A minor observation.

In the introducttion, first paragraph, the sentence:
"MSRP is currently defined to work over TCP and TLS connections, and 
over a WebSocket subprotocol specified by [RFC7977 
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7977>]."

The word "currently" will not be well selected if this specification 
gets approved and published.

I suggest:

"MSRP was initially in RFC 4975 defined to work over TCP and TLS 
connections, and over a WebSocket subprotocol specified by [RFC7977 
<https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7977>]."

Regards

Gunnar


Den 2020-05-06 kl. 17:20, skrev Bo Burman:
>
> Greetings MMUSIC ,
>
> This is to announce a 2 week WGLC on the draft:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-msrp-usage-data-channel-16 
>
>
> as Proposed Standard. Please review and provide any comments you may 
> have on the document by
>
> Wednesday, May 20, 2020.
>
> Comments should be sent to the document authors and the MMUSIC WG list.
>
> If you review the document but do not have any comments, please send a 
> note to that effect as well.
>
> Thanks,
>
> /Bo
>
> (MMUSIC co-chair)
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