Re: [MMUSIC] FW: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-13.txt

"Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com> Tue, 13 January 2015 17:56 UTC

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From: "Ali C. Begen (abegen)" <abegen@cisco.com>
To: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>, "mmusic@ietf.org" <mmusic@ietf.org>
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Hi Paul,

-----Original Message-----
From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzivat@alum.mit.edu>
Date: Tuesday, January 13, 2015 at 7:07 PM
To: "mmusic@ietf.org" <mmusic@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] FW: New Version Notification for
draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-13.txt

>* Section 8.2.4:
>
>I see a number of things have been removed from this section. IIUC this
>is because of concerns that came up with Christer tried to follow the
>new style for a draft. The problem there was that all this information
>was included in the IANA Considerations section, and was redundant with
>information in the body of the draft.
>
>But with the new changes there is no longer a requirement to provide
>this information at all. Note that the beginning of this section says:
>
>    New attribute registrations are accepted according to the
>    "Specification Required" policy of [RFC5226], provided that the
>    specification includes the following information:
>
>This calls for the information in the *specification*, not in the IANA
>Considerations section of the specification.
>
>So "Attribute value" needs to be reinstated. This is the only place
>where the syntax is required.

OK, I see your point. I added the “attribute value” from -12. Also, one
item below, I change the text:

OLD:
Usage level of the attribute. (One or more of: session,
              media).


NEW:
Usage level of the attribute. (One or more of: session,
              media, source).


>
>(I'm fine with Long-form going away. It doesn't seem to serve any
>purpose.)

It is gone already :)

-acbegen

PS I confirmed the charset abnf with the appsawg co-chair. There is a new
work for that (draft-iana-charset-reg-procedure). I am now referring to
that draft for the abnf definition.

>
>	Thanks,
>	Paul