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[MMUSIC] AD evaluation: draft-ietf-mmusic-udptl-dtls-07

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 28 May 2014 00:11 UTC

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I have reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. It’s in
good shape. I will issue the last call. Couple of nits to be resolved with
any last call comments:

Section 1:
s/clearly defined, well understood and implementations are widely
available./clearly defined and well understood and implementations are
widely available./

Section 4.5:
s/same rules of for/same rules for/

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