Re: [MMUSIC] WGLC of last set of changes to Bundle (draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-22)

"Stach, Thomas" <thomas.stach@unify.com> Mon, 22 June 2015 14:39 UTC

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I did a review of the changes in -22. 
It looks good to go, I just came across a few typos. 

Section 9.1
1st para:   associate a received data --> associate received data
2nd para:   if a received data can be associated --> if received data can be associated

Section 10.2, 
4th para:   they will use or RTP and RTCP --> they will use for RTP and RTCP


Regards
Thomas

> -----Original Message-----
> From: mmusic [mailto:mmusic-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Flemming Andreasen
> Sent: Montag, 22. Juni 2015 15:01
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> Subject: [MMUSIC] WGLC of last set of changes to Bundle (draft-ietf-mmusic-
> sdp-bundle-negotiation-22)
> 
> Greetings
> 
> We have had a couple of WGLCs of the bundle draft already with
> subsequent updates to address comments received. This is to announce a
> final 1 week WGLC on the last set of bundle draft changes in
> 
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-22
> 
> since the -19 version as reflected by
> 
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-
> 19&url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-sdp-bundle-negotiation-22
> 
> Please take a look at these changes and let us know if you have any
> comments by Monday June 29. Comments should be sent to the document
> authors and the MMUSIC WG list. If you review the changes but do not
> have any comments, please send a note to that effect as well.
> 
> Thanks
> 
>      Flemming (MMUSIC co-chair)
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