Re: [MMUSIC] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-32.txt

Roman Shpount <roman@telurix.com> Tue, 04 June 2019 23:34 UTC

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Date: Tue, 04 Jun 2019 19:33:52 -0400
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-32.txt
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I think there is a misspelling in section 3.2.5: scontrolling  should be
controlling.
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Roman Shpount


On Mon, Jun 3, 2019 at 11:39 PM Suhas Nandakumar <suhasietf@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Version 32 addresses Flemming's review comments, IDNits error
>
> Thanks
> Suhas
>
> On Mon, Jun 3, 2019 at 8:37 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
>
>>
>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> This draft is a work item of the Multiparty Multimedia Session Control WG
>> of the IETF.
>>
>>         Title           : Session Description Protocol (SDP) Offer/Answer
>> procedures for Interactive Connectivity Establishment (ICE)
>>         Authors         : Marc Petit-Huguenin
>>                           Suhas Nandakumar
>>                           Ari Keranen
>>         Filename        : draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-32.txt
>>         Pages           : 42
>>         Date            : 2019-06-03
>>
>> Abstract:
>>    This document describes Session Description Protocol (SDP) Offer/
>>    Answer procedures for carrying out Interactive Connectivity
>>    Establishment (ICE) between the agents.
>>
>>    This document obsoletes RFC 5245.
>>
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp/
>>
>> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-32
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-32
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mmusic-ice-sip-sdp-32
>>
>>
>> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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>>
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