[MMUSIC] [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27

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Subject: [MMUSIC] [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27
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Document: draft-ietf-mmusic-dtls-sdp-27
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2017-07-07
IETF LC End Date: 2017-07-24
IESG Telechat date: 2017-08-15

Summary:

This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should 
be fixed before publication.

(These nits were reported by IdNits. I apologize for not noticing these 
during my Last Call review.)

Issues:

Major: 0
Minor: 0
Nits:  2

(1) NIT: Unused Reference: 'RFC5245' is defined on line 1065, but no 
explicit reference was found in the text

This is now redundant because all the references in the text have been 
changed to draft-ietf-ice-rfc5245bis.

(2) NIT: Obsolete informational reference (is this intentional?): RFC 4572

This is now obsolete because it has been replaced by RFC8122. This draft 
should now be referencing that.