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Re: [MMUSIC] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04: (with COMMENT)

Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com> Fri, 27 August 2021 13:24 UTC

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From: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04: (with COMMENT)
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Thanks Christer!

Francesca

On 26/08/2021, 19:40, "Christer Holmberg" <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> wrote:

    Hi Francesca,

    Thank You for the review! Please see inline.


    ----------------------------------------------------------------------
    COMMENT:
    ----------------------------------------------------------------------

    >Thanks to Claudio Allocchio for the ART ART review: I agree with him that mentioning IETF 110 in Section 1.4 seem strange, and I would suggest rewording to remove that.

    I can remove the sentence.

    ---

    >Additionally in the same section, mentioning erratas by their numbers does not help a reader who is not familiar with the IETF errata reporting system: instead, I would suggest to
    >rephrase so to give a high level summary to the reader about what these erratas were about.

    The erratas were fixing a couple minor editorial and reference nits, so I don't think we need to describe those.

    ---

    >Below, two nits I happened to notice.
    >
    >Francesca
    >
    >## Nits
    >
    >1. ----
    >
    >   *  In a subsequent offer, or in an answer (initial of subsequent),
    >
    >FP: s/of/or

    Will fix as suggested.

    ---

    2. ----

    >   If the
    >   answer wants to move the "m=" section out of the BUNDLE group, it
    >   will have to first accept it
    >
    >FP: s/answer/answerer

    Will fix as suggestd.

    ---

    Regards,

    Christer

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