Re: [MMUSIC] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc8843bis-04: (with COMMENT)
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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>, The IESG
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Francesca Palombini's No Objection on
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Hi Francesca, Thank You for the review! Please see inline. ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >Thanks to Claudio Allocchio for the ART ART review: I agree with him that mentioning IETF 110 in Section 1.4 seem strange, and I would suggest rewording to remove that. I can remove the sentence. --- >Additionally in the same section, mentioning erratas by their numbers does not help a reader who is not familiar with the IETF errata reporting system: instead, I would suggest to >rephrase so to give a high level summary to the reader about what these erratas were about. The erratas were fixing a couple minor editorial and reference nits, so I don't think we need to describe those. --- >Below, two nits I happened to notice. > >Francesca > >## Nits > >1. ---- > > * In a subsequent offer, or in an answer (initial of subsequent), > >FP: s/of/or Will fix as suggested. --- 2. ---- > If the > answer wants to move the "m=" section out of the BUNDLE group, it > will have to first accept it > >FP: s/answer/answerer Will fix as suggestd. --- Regards, Christer
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