Re: [MMUSIC] Draft new version: 8843bis-02

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Thu, 10 June 2021 09:51 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] Draft new version: 8843bis-02
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Paul, are you happy with the way your comments have been addressed?

Regards,

Christer

From: mmusic <mmusic-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Christer Holmberg
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Subject: [MMUSIC] Draft new version: 8843bis-02

Hi,

I have submitted a new version (-02) of 8843bis.

Based on Paul's comment, the latest version contains two new sub-sections, 7.3.5 and 7.4.1, that in addition to describing the differences from 8843 also include examples showing the differences.

Unless I have missed something, all WGLC comments should now have been addressed.

Regards,

Christer