[MMUSIC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4566bis-34

Zitao Wang via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 08 April 2019 06:37 UTC

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Reviewer: Zitao Wang
Review result: Has Issues

Summary:    This memo defines the Session Description Protocol (SDP).  SDP is 
intended for describing multimedia sessions for the purposes of session
announcement, session invitation, and other forms of multimedia session
initiation.  This document obsoletes RFC 4566. I think the document make sense
and is written very clear, except some small nits: # In Section 5, there are
several terms that miss references, such as "US-ASCII subset of UTF-8",  "ASN.1
or XDR", etc. # s/session- specific/session-specific/ # Suggest to add tags on
"overview optional items" to identified now-obsolete items, such as "a=cat",
"a=keywds", "k=".