[Modern] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03: (with COMMENT)
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 22 February 2018 03:44 UTC
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Subject: [Modern] Ben Campbell's Yes on draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03: (with COMMENT)
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Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework-03: Yes When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-modern-problem-framework/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- I am balloting yes, but I do have a few minor comments: Substantive: §1: "An enterprise, for example, can deploy an IP PBX that receives a block of telephone numbers from a carrier and then in turn distribute those numbers to new IP telephones when they associate with the PBX. " That's been true for PBX's since well before the advent of IP PBXs. §2.1, Numbering Authority: "A regulatory body within a country" I suspect "country" should be "region", since the definition goes on to consider non-country domains. Editorial and Nits: §2.1, last paragraph (before figure): "and it issues 10,000 blocks of TNs to CSPs" Should that be "10,000 blocks" or "blocks of 10,000 TNs"? §4.1.1: Please define "freephone". Last paragraph: "... not inventory.In ..." Missing space after period. §4.2.3.1: " In a similar model to common practice in some environments today..." Should that be a "model similar to common practice"? §4.3, 2nd to last paragraph: The paragraph seems to end mid-sentence. §4.3.1: s/ Eithert / Either
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