[Modern] Comments on draft-peterson-modern-teri-03

"McGarry, Tom" <Tom.McGarry@team.neustar> Tue, 18 July 2017 09:42 UTC

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From: "McGarry, Tom" <Tom.McGarry@team.neustar>
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Jon, there are a few places where you need more text, e.g., 4.2.1.1, 4.2.1.1.1, 4.2.1.6, and 4.2.2.  I'll work with you on that.

Tom McGarry