[Mops] My comments on draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-07
Renan Krishna <Renan.Krishna@InterDigital.com> Fri, 07 January 2022 12:16 UTC
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From: Renan Krishna <Renan.Krishna@InterDigital.com>
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Subject: [Mops] My comments on draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-07
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Hi Everyone, Apologies for the delay in providing this feedback. My comments on draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-07 follow: Overall comments: The draft provides a timely and comprehensive snapshot of the current operational issues that network operators, service providers, and protocol designers must consider when dealing with streaming video traffic. These operational issues are not obvious to those without specific video expertise. Therefore, the draft will prove useful for providing such a list of issues against which engineering solutions could be evaluated for standardization at the IETF. Additionally, Section 7 provides a comprehensive list of references and pointers for anyone interested in a deeper exploration of the operational issues. I therefore support this draft. Some minor issues: 1) The scope of the document could be expressed more clearly in the abstract and introduction. 2) Section 2.1.2: Is it possible to provide a reference/explanation for the following line: "The typical multiplication factor is 8 to 10" 3) Section 2.6: Suggested change : "faiils" -> "fails" 4) Section 4.6: The text "In addition to measurements....... is providing the best experience for viewers." is repeated. 5) Section 4.6.2: Suggested change: "assumes" -> "assume" 6) Section 5.3 Suggested change: "....congestion hooks that can be use" -> "....congestion hooks that can be used" Suggested change: "...congestion controllers in use for TCP base" -> "...congestion controllers in use for TCP based" 7) Section 6.3: The hyperlink for the reference "[RFC7258]" is not working. 8) Section 7.2.4 Presumably, the following is not meant to be a bullet point but a heading for the bullet points that follow? " * Low-Latency Live Streaming: The following papers describe the peculiarities of adaptive streaming in low-latency live streaming scenarios." Regards, Renan Dr. Renan Krishna Staff Engineer | InterDigital T: +44-20-39221788 E: Renan.Krishna@InterDigital.com<mailto:Renan.Krishna@InterDigital.com>
- [Mops] My comments on draft-ietf-mops-streaming-o… Renan Krishna
- Re: [Mops] My comments on draft-ietf-mops-streami… Spencer Dawkins at IETF
- Re: [Mops] My comments on draft-ietf-mops-streami… Ali C. Begen
- Re: [Mops] My comments on draft-ietf-mops-streami… Spencer Dawkins at IETF