[Mops] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-10: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 10 May 2022 05:36 UTC

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Subject: [Mops] Erik Kline's No Objection on draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-10: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-10: No Objection

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# Internet AD comments for {draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-10}
CC @ekline

## Comments

### S3.4

* It seems like the final paragraph is attempting to describe a real-world
  experience.  It would be great if there were a citation for this (but
  understandable if nothing had been made public).

### S3.6

* RFC 5594 does not appear to contain the word "throttle".  It might not
  be great to inject this term here?  5594 instead seems to use phrases
  describing approaches to "congestion management".

### S4.4

* Seems like the introduction of the term "manifest" without any
  definition, explanation, or reference.  Is there some explanatory text
  or reference that might be included?

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