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Re: [Mops] AD review of draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-09

"Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com> Fri, 08 April 2022 15:18 UTC

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From: "Holland, Jake" <jholland@akamai.com>
To: Kyle Rose <krose@krose.org>, Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>, "Ali C. Begen" <ali.begen@networked.media>, Jake Holland <jakeholland.net@gmail.com>
CC: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "mops-chairs@ietf.org" <mops-chairs@ietf.org>, MOPS Working Group <mops@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Mops] AD review of draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-09
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Hi Kyle,

Yes, there’s been some activity in the repo and we haven’t yet published a new draft.

Spencer has split each of Eric’s comments into an issue, and in our 2 sessions in the last 2 weeks we’ve discussed I think most of them so far with text for many, and we have another session scheduled for next week.

Please do feel free to review and comment:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-mops/draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons/issues

I will highlight #98 in particular as a wordsmithing complaint that has us stumped.  I think we’ll happily take text suggestions that have any buy-in that they successfully clarify the use of “simultaneous” to more closely describe “at the same time, but with a latency-driven time gap between sender and receiver” without getting more verbose and hard to follow, else the default plan is to mark it ‘wontfix’:
https://github.com/ietf-wg-mops/draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons/issues/98

-Jake


From: Kyle Rose <krose@krose.org>
Date: Fri,2022-04-08 at 7:41 AM
To: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>, "Ali C. Begen" <ali.begen@networked.media>, Jake Holland <jakeholland.net@gmail.com>
Cc: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "mops-chairs@ietf.org" <mops-chairs@ietf.org>, MOPS Working Group <mops@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Mops] AD review of draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-09

Spencer, Jake, Ali: have you guys had a chance to address Éric's coments? The document is still in the "revised I-D needed" state on the data tracker. If there has been activity in the GitHub repo but no new draft pushed, that would also be useful information to share.

Thanks,
Kyle

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