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Re: [Mops] AD review of draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-09 - nits

"Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com> Fri, 15 April 2022 14:23 UTC

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>
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Thread-Topic: [Mops] AD review of draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-09 - nits
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Hello Spencer,

Thank you for all the hard work done on github !

Indeed, my last non-blocking comment on section 3.7 was on the last paragraph:


               "At the IXP-level, it was observed that port utilization increased.
      This phenomenon is mostly explained by a higher traffic demand
      from residential users"

Suggestion replace:  "is mostly explained" by "could probably be explained" as it is a (educated) guess + add why residential traffic has increased (i.e., I would assumed that all streaming traffic goes with CDN caches in the access provider, hence bypassing IXP, so this traffic may be VPN traffic ?)

Regards

-éric


From: Spencer Dawkins at IETF <spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Friday, 15 April 2022 at 15:17
To: Eric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>
Cc: MOPS Working Group <mops@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [Mops] AD review of draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-09 - nits

Hi, Eric,

I'm working my way through the nits from your review, and had questions on one point. Could you clue me in on the following?

On Sat, Mar 19, 2022 at 3:23 PM Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org<mailto:40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>> wrote:

# Section 3.7

In " it was observed that port utilization increased" port is ambiguous: is it IXP physical interface ? UDP/TCP ports ? or something else ?
We have a PR on this ^^^, but I'm not sure what to do with your next comment, and I'd love to Do The Right Thing.

 In the same paragraph, an explanation to the explanation would be welcome.
I'm pretty sure we're talking about this paragraph in -09

   *  At the IXP-level, it was observed that port utilization increased.
      This phenomenon is mostly explained by a higher traffic demand
      from residential users.

which is unchanged (so far) in the Editor's Copy

Am I digging in the right place?

Does this paragraph need to mention the reasons provided for higher traffic demand from residential users, in the three references quoted in this section, or were you thinking of something else?

Best,

Spencer

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