[Mops] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-10: (with COMMENT)

[Robert Wilton via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-mops-streaming-opcons-10: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Hi,

Thank you for this document and thanks Linda for the OPS DIR review.  I find
these sorts of documents to be informative and interesting, and I found this
document to be interesting and pleasant to read - so thank you for that.

I only have a couple of trivial comments:

(1) The introduction made it clear that "download and play" is out of scope,
but it was less clear to me from the introduction as to whether RTC was meant
to be in scope or not.

(2)
5.1.  Overview
"ad workflows are introduced."
 - "ad" is being used before it is later defined in 5.4.

Regards,
Rob