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Re: [mpls] Question on draft-ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis-09.txt

t.petch <ietfc@btconnect.com> Fri, 02 December 2016 18:12 UTC

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Carlos

not quite


s.7.4 "This section updates the procedure defined in Step 6 of section
4.4.
   of [I-D.ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis]"
but there is no 'Updates' in the header.

s.6 " The following protocols are defined in section 3.4.1.2 of
   [I-D.ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis]:
but s.10.2  has "3.4.2.1 "

s.7.4 "   This section updates the procedure defined in Step 6 of
section 4.4.
   of [I-D.ietf-mpls-rfc4379bis]"

mmm 'updates'  I cannot tell what text in 4379bis is replaced by what
text in this I-D.  Even with a fertile imagination, I cannot see how to
turn this into a single piece of  (pseudo-)code.  The two sections,
4379bis and this I-D, seem disjoint.

mmmm2  The English has a somewhat Oriental flavour, missing 'the',
plurals and singulars mixed up, interesting words ("&pop& "  "Incase")
and such like. This is not a bar to understanding, but it jars (with
me).

 Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <cpignata@cisco.com>
To: "Aissaoui, Mustapha (Nokia - CA)" <mustapha.aissaoui@nokia.com>
Cc: "t.petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com>; <mpls@ietf.org>
Sent: Thursday, December 01, 2016 11:06 PM


> Mustapha, Tom,
>
> The new revision should address all these issues, and fix a couple
additional editorials.
>
> Could you please review?
>
> Name: draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping
> Revision: 02
> Title: Label Switched Path (LSP) Ping/Trace for Segment Routing
Networks Using MPLS Dataplane
> Document date: 2016-12-01
> Group: mpls
> Pages: 18
> URL:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-02.
txt
> Status:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping/
> Htmlized:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-02
> Diff:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-spring-lsp-ping-02
>
> Thanks!
>
> —
> Carlos Pignataro, carlos@cisco.com<mailto:carlos@cisco.com>

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